Searria H.

Weee! I'm on a reviewing-your-stuff rampage! I thought this was a really good poem, and it worked really well having the girl tell the story. Who exactly is Jake? Her ...

You should make a book of poems or something... This was beautiful writing. The only thing I would point out is that you use beautiful a little too much in ...

This was very good for a first poem! I've written at least fifteen, and my last one didn't come close to this! :D I think your way of separating the ...

Another amazing Drawing!! The only crit. I have is that the left side(our left) is not as clear as the right. There's not much you can do about that, assuming ...

This drawing was really good, and I agree with Clo about the shading. It will just add more depth to your drawing. I think her feet look a little strange ...

I agree with Myfriendsavamp about the boys arm. This is a very sweet drawing, and I really like it in pencil, for some reason. Did you not have this as ...

This was good. Maybe it was becuase of the hoodie, but It looked to me like her head was slightly too big. The proportioning was good with the neck and ...

Very interesting. I liked the first two sentences. They really captured my attention. Claustrophobia takes hold; I imagine a geriatric mass operating as a single entity, closing around me, gripping ...

Hmmm. I thought for sure I reviewed this already. Oh, well. Better late than never. Personally, I like this dragon a little more that your flying dragon because it has ...

Okay. Interesting start, but it was a little on the short side. Prologues don't have to have a specific length, but you didn't give quite enough information for me to ...

I can't even imagine how long this must have taken you! I'm officially a big fan. Well, I was about 4 or 5 pictures ago, I just keep forgetting to ...

I hope your teacher liked it!!! I love her hair-do! :D I like the expression of her face. It actually looks like she's looking at someone or something and not ...

Wow. This is really complicated! It must have taken you forever! I personally like the top fairy that isn't smiling. I don't know, something about her makes her more sincere ...

Although the first one is very creative and original, I personally like the second one better. I like the shading and the streaks in the pupil are amazing. I have ...

YOU ARE NEW AT DRAWING DRAGONS???????? :shock: :shock: :shock: My goodnes! This was amazing. As was said before, THe boat really caught my eye. The dragons scales were all very ...